Madlib Poem

Today’s prompt is to create a Madlib Poem. My first attempt was a big failure, but I kind of like my second poem, strange as it may be. Interestingly, I entered only positive, strength-based and diabetes-related words (adjectives, nouns and verbs) and what was generated came across as not quite so positive. So I did a little tweaking. I can’t say my style jives with e.e. cummings, but here it is:

healthy health’s healthy health (by Jane K. and e.e. cummings)

responsible i have always managed, organized beyond
any choice, your motivations have their positive:
in your most whole vigor are things which pursue me,
or which i will jump because they are so active

your strong look busy will not unrun me
though i have smiled myself as responsibility,
you laugh always endurance by endurance myself as work live
(writing successful, proud) her focused reward

or if your equipment be to interact me, i and
my technology will choose very happy, well-adjusted,
as when the attitude of this choice succeed
the strength energetic everywhere persevering;

nothing which we are to exercise in this focus
the determination of your determined fitness: whose wellness
inject me with the joy of its life,
responding belief and goal with each thinking

(i do not believe what it is about you that endure
and create; only something in me determine
the success of my motivation is motivated than all work)
activity, not even the medication, has such driven energy

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